Enormous changes appeared in transportation tools such as in, cars, trains, ships, airplanes since few decades of life, which made the people life steadily. i refused that in twenty years ahead fewer cars will be available for people to use. I fell this way for two main reasons. Which i will going to discuss in this essay. First, companies would releasing their new products day by day to support company budgets into the societies. Secondly, the more populations the greater use of transportation tools.
First of all, companies efforts a lot to bring huge changes in their products for supporting the budgets and also they want to attract the consumers. If we select car's production company as a tittle, they are well to do convince the people about their new products. as a results, consumers would increase day by day. Thus, different cars would be available in societies for using. For instances, my friend works in a car's company. He mentioned that we are releasing about 1000 cars each year into the societies which helping the people to live more in rest.
In addition, as we know the population get increase day by day, their wishes are make the life more easy for live. the greater amount of people in a society has direct effects on import cars there, Because each person wants to have easy life. cars made the life of people steadily. For example, in the past people migrated from one place to another by walking which was really hard for them. looking into this point people do not want to live in struggle anymore, they are trying to find transport tool such as cars to make them more comfort, and also make them satisfy in the routes they wants to live.
To sum up, day by day the transportation tools by people is in progressing. I feel this way for two reasons. First, such as cars make people more comfort to reach to their destination easy. Secondly, companies would never stop releasing cars because of their budgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71470588235 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46612166273 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3341836655 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890202559526 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352329099643 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510775700949 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648399068151 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356144963439 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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