TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Car is the one of the most outstanding human's creature which is profitable in daily life such as time-saver and easy to use. Some people believe that car will never outdated because of the necessity. However, I for one, its consumption will diminish after few years and people will choose more healthy way to go their work or school. There are three main ideas why I believe that.
First of all, people tend to use vehicle which is beneficial to the environment. Even though technological development is astonishing, it influences in a negative way to our nature such as deforestation, excessive waste, flood, drought. Also, car emits carbon dioxide which aggregate greenhouse gas and If it obsoleted people just throw it away, at result car becomes garbage. Therefore, people have chosen bicycle or just walking so far, due to the fact that protect our one and only planet which human can life. For instance, I saw that Japanese students are always biking no matter how freezing or roasting it was, when I had been travelling in that area.
Secondly, using car everyday lead to terrifying diseases which are caused by lack of movement. To put it more simply, after machine was invented, some people stopped doing physical activities. As a consequence, its misuse impacts human health such as hearts disease, headache, easy to break bones etc. For instance, our ancestors filled up their vitamin D from sun while walking and never gained weight because of the continuous movement. Hence, we have to prevent get sick and cease using cars.
Finally, stress's main recourse is traffic jam and it's one of the most concerning problem for every country. Sometimes we get stuck in a middle of the road and that is the reason why we missed important meetings. As a result people are becoming aggressive. Therefore, people tired of falling wheels.
In a nutshell, car getting out of humans utility because of the nature, health and stress. So that, in twenty years we will not see a hundreds of cars trying to figure out.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
Car is the one of the most outstanding humans creature which is profitable in daily l...
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...velopment is astonishing, it influences in a negative way to our nature such as deforestation, ex...
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
... garbage. Therefore, people have chosen bicycle or just walking so far, due to the fact...
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eason why we missed important meetings. As a result people are becoming aggressive...
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a hundred'
Suggestion: a hundred
...o that, in twenty years we will not see a hundreds of cars trying to figure out.
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hundred' or simply 'hundreds'?
Suggestion: a hundred; hundreds
...o that, in twenty years we will not see a hundreds of cars trying to figure out.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61455411261 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615160349854 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5693505869 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.65 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930355334034 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028461711751 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329294688361 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580744607179 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347636089945 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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