Nowadays, in 2018, with advancement of technology and these smarts phone and smart bot which people used to them, also children faced on different of things that was inventing so they think about a peaceful life in future and most of the time they don’t think about invent something new, but on the other hand, some intelligent children think about how they can to change the world with make some robots to make the people life easier. So I think the parents play an important role.
First, the benefits of nature for children development are endless. Because nature is ever changing, it provides countless opportunities for discovery, creativity, and problem solving. The natural world inspires children to think, question, make suppositions, and develop creative minds. For example, I remember when I was child my grand mamma always told me; lie on the ground and look up at the sky and tell me what you see, or what do you think about shapes of clouds? And I don’t know why most of the time I drew clouds like as ships.
Second, when your child invents a scenario, he tries on lots of different roles and organizes his thoughts while developing social and verbal skills. Encourage your child to play house, doctor, zoo, farm, space station, school, or store. Join in the imaginative play by taking on a role yourself. Play with stuffed toys or puppets (make simple puppets by putting your hand in a sock). Let your child lead your playtime together. If your child is into superheroes, think of the power your child might want as his own superpower feeling. Consider having your child create a new superhero. I remember I was 5 that I started telling the imagination story and my mother encouraged me and nowadays after 20 years, I’m a professional writer, and I’m really thankful of my mother.
Third, in the past, due to lack of facilities and lack of parental inattention to education, less was seen to pay attention to art and creativity, but at the same time, in developing countries, there were interesting and useful inventions for society, but today creativity is divided into different sectors.
In conclusion, the ability to be creative, to create something from personal feelings and experiences, can reflect and nurture children's emotional health. I hope that the examples given above have sufficiently expressed my opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, second, so, third, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00253164557 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71529579918 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605063291139 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.2761611508 48.9658058833 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137424687938 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365731483551 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300337909189 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695058017974 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187364701223 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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