There are certain considerations or factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine the computer games. I certainly do not agree that computer games are time wasting. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, computer games contribute children to move with new technologies. These days, the world alters swiftly and all human experience a huge enhancement and achievement in several fields of science and engineering such as transportation, communication, health caring, and even artificial intelligence. In this progressive world, computer games play a crucial role by offering instructive and persuasive contexts for children. They can aid and abet youngsters to keep the pace with these practical and theoretical inventions. Improving educational process can be one of the most significant consequences.
Furthermore, having fun time to avoid from stress is another noticeable reason. Nowadays, almost all youths, who attend to the school, have to study hard enough to comprehend the topics and materials that have been covered in the courses. Because of this, they should feel stressed, pressured, and depressed. Based on a research, which has been carried out by Society Department of Utah in 2016, school age children are 30% more prone and vulnerable to heart palpitation, chronic daily headache, and hypertension. This research advocates that computer games can provide happy and exciting environment for children, and hence delay or prevent from those sophisticated and problematic issues.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that computer games can waste children's time. Chiefly, computer games bring children’s attention away from other activities. In other words, children should be addicted to computer games and do not indicate sufficient time and energy for their household tasks like car washing. However, still I affirm that playing computer games has a lot of benefits. Although, computer games have some flaws and disadvantages, they can be neglected. Besides, parent can limit playing computer games for two or three hours in a day. This can address and solve the addiction problem, and also children have an opportunity to devote time for mentioned house duties.
Due to the aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that computer games are beneficial. Participation of technology and healthiness are two prime and conspicuous supports.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
'Nowadays, almost all youths, ' ==>Nowadays, almost all children, //'youths' is not equal to 'children'
'and do not indicate sufficient time and energy for their household tasks like car washing.' ==> and do not indicate sufficient time and energy for their homework such as assignments. //maybe some children don't have car washing
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 379 350
No. of Characters: 2046 1500
No. of Different Words: 234 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.412 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.398 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.946 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.478 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.318 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.348 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.497 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.062 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59102902375 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09567391662 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625329815303 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.843633145 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1304347826 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47826086957 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235766070445 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726877201227 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646541001149 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119809747231 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064138834596 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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