Technological advances are always accompanied by a question: does this new technology benefit its users or do the benefits of the new technology outweigh its drawbacks? Some scientists believe that each technological advance has disadvantages besides the advantages it brings to the users. Thus, the major point is whether the advantages of technological advance outperform its disadvantages or not.
One of the major advantages of a large amount of information available using the Internet is that in this way Internet makes us capable to have access to information that we cannot access easily otherwise. In other words, there are some sources of information which people have to spend a lot of time or money to get access to. For example, consider a student who has to research on her thesis by reading the sources which are only available in a library too far from her university. In this condition, she has to spend her time and money to reach the library and borrow the book.
In addition, using the Internet, people are able to access the information each time they need. For example, students are able to read a pdf format of a book at any time during the day or night. Also, consider the banking services as an important example. Using the E-banking, people can check their accounts, pay their debts, and purchase goods and services at any time, even at nights, without the need to wait until the banks open.
On the other hand, one of the drawbacks of a lot of information provided by the Internet it provides the user with an unprotected, uncontrolled environment contains all sorts of information and if it is not used properly, it adversely influences the user. For instance, the children who use the Internet without supervision and control of their parents may harm from the inappropriate contents including music and films.
In conclusion, I strongly assert that a large amount of information which is available on the Internet is significantly valuable and does not create serious problems for the users.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reach the library and borrow the book. In addition, using the Internet, people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91230976958 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519174041298 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.559522408 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193689351314 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658671357656 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716903496378 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102315336627 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493038595554 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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