TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you

We are living in a modern society with the assistance of the internet which provides people with a tremendous key to get a variety of valuable information. Understanding this phenomenon, people appreciate and enjoy using the internet. However, some people think that the access too much information generates serious problems. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, getting information on the internet enables people to save time. We are living in technological world. It seems to me that people often feel short of time due to the fact that nowadays life is more complex than ever before. To meet the requirement of the standard of living in this world people have to work hard to earn money and to get experience in order to be professional. Therefore, many people tend to get the information on the internet is understandable. To be more specific, students have to do a lot of research and complete a number of papers in their studies. The internet helps them to enrich their academic knowledge significantly on a certain time.
Alongside the elaborated reason above, another idea that is noteworthy to consider is that getting the information on the internet is the most convenient way. There are plenty of web sides and programs on the internet, which are written by many people. They allow people to look at diversify information that means people can select the information and they can avoid their bias as well. Moreover, the internet provides people with an easy way to look at the information. They just need to type the key words. There are tremendous information will appear on the screen. They also do not need to take time to go to library or store to find books.
Last but not least by getting the information the internet enable people to save money. Money plays an important role in our lives. People do not need to buy books or magazines as before. They just need to have a computer or a smart phone to access the internet.
In conclusion, people have their own preferences to get the information. For three reasons, which I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
...information. They just need to type the key words. There are tremendous information will ...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...rary or store to find books. Last but not least by getting the information the internet...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple with a lot of valuable information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84575835476 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81357506113 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480719794344 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9812292523 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.56 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313049259067 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903806107259 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770135618962 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196320775995 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720080996494 0.0645574589148 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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