TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you
Information on World Wide Web is a very important part of our lives. It is a vital aspect in every human being because it can give us available information with just a click of the button. There is a great debate whether Internet provides humanity with valuable information, while others disagree. In my opinion, access to the Internet has a positive outcome to people such as providing them with essential information needed in everyday lives.
First of all, Internet serves the people with every imaginable information they needed to acquire. My own experience is a compelling example of this, when I was in my vacation in Cebu City, I was with my group of friends preparing for our tour that day. As we are going out the hotel room we noticed that the weather is very gloomy. Therefore, we checked the local news in the Internet and learned that there is a strong typhoon heading Cebu City. So we cancelled all our plans for that day and stayed at our hotel and just enjoy each other company. In addition, having readily available resources like the net really helps because in times of calamity you can quickly search the web or the weather news to get an update of the current situation of the place you are in.
Secondly, the web can provide you with important information. Nowadays, gathering data is very easy, due to you will just input keywords to the search bar and hundreds of information will just pop on your screen. For instance, when I was in college, Professor Green always gives us research topic to study and I was having hard time complying on deadline because I'm not yet familiar in searching the web. Luckily, my friend suggests I researched on the net and to my surprise there are huge data available on the Internet. By doing so, I saved time due to I have finished my projects half the time spending on the library. Hence, data available in the Internet are reliable because it is up to date and publishers spends time making the information accurate and concise.
To summarize, I believe that the Internet provide valuable information to people. This is because people will acquire easily available information in the news through the help of internet. Also, the web can help everyone with useful information just by searching google or other flat forms available.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...riends preparing for our tour that day. As we are going out the hotel room we noti...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...hard time complying on deadline because Im not yet familiar in searching the web. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76441102757 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61470662299 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521303258145 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5491909419 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.052631579 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220952033926 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794465698047 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684761995411 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157109952934 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053328706782 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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