Tpo 12. Do you agree with the statement. It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific one.
Having a good knowledge is essential for everyone. It is thought by some people that being specialized in a particular subject is better than having a broad knowledge. However, I believe that people who tend to learn about everything are more well-rounded. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore on the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one of the reasons why people should aim to learn about any academic subject is because they would become very well informed and use that knowledge throughout their lives. Contrary to the belief that knowing about one thing in very deep level would mahe students more competent in their studies, evidence shows that in fact, students are well equipted with knowledge if they do learn about different topics. A recent studey conducted from the University of Californis has indicated that students who knew the bases of different subjects were able to solve problems quicker than students who knew well only about a specific subject. According to this study, it would be better for young adults to seek for a broad knowledge.
Secondly, student who would like to study for a variety of subjects would have many more opportunities than students who know only one specific thing. Nowadays, we live in a society where it is crucial to have a wide beackground, which helps people to navigate throgh the unexpacted changes. My experience is a compelling example of this. About twenty five years ago, my brother studied for ingenering. He loved that profession and was passionated about it. As a result, he was very into it such as he wanted to become specialized in a pertivular subject. After he got a master degree on that subject matter, he found very good job in a specific company who was producing that perticular electronic device. However, with the development of the new technology, many earlier companies failed to sell their product with a profitable price. So the company got closed and my brother did not had a job. In addition, he found it very difficult to learn how to do other things rather than just building that specific device. Overall, young generation should learn broda knowledge, so they could train themselves and to be open to new opportunities that come across.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
Having a good knowledge is essential for everyone. It is though...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
...articular subject is better than having a broad knowledge. However, I believe that people who ten...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thing are more well-rounded. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explor...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
... be better for young adults to seek for a broad knowledge. Secondly, student who would like to...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...mpany got closed and my brother did not had a job. In addition, he found it very di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93915343915 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69746974914 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3657970529 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2631578947 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233063228151 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650543226819 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671162948844 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162860253548 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168831966172 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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