TPO-12 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Knowledge to a broad spectrum, when taking into account, makes a person educated, intelligent and enhance personality as it was never before. Being a illiterate is not a guilty but having a resources for knowledge in a particular field of aspects is important. now I am coming to my main point, that, it is perfect to specialize in one subject rather than fall into many academics major. I feel this way for three main reason: people capability to reflect on one main field, many students always get into trouble for their main subject due to extra subjects and I think, person should take a command on a specific field.

First of all, every body has it's own capacity to absorb different perspectives of life, do not need to acquire a lot of pressure into shoulders, take a breathe and just go with the flow. There is nothing significant to obtain a power into all accounts. For example: my elder brother was very brilliant in chemistry but when the question was arrive for the physics, he completely denied his self. So my mom suggests him pick up one major and remain the other low, just to gain information about it.
Secondly, most of the students paying too much that neither they crossing it nor they understand. Thus, there is no need to run towards all the subject, pick up your favorite; interesting subject and blast in it according to the way you want. Also, it will help full economically, less expensive to trouble with single in spite of, bound to the different subject, which is definitely not easy to handle.
Last but not the least, being a comfortable on a particular field gives the right path, onto which, person must accommodate with his life, sacrifice his routine to develop a knowledge regarding that major and do the best in one way up to the end. To illustrate, I am a dentist and for this, when I look back, just passed my days and nights in running towards dentistry and now, if I am looking at my self, proudly saying that just achieve all my dreams. This is because I choose only one subject and do specialty in particular subject.

To conclude, getting education in every field is important and necessary, but to involve in one major subject take you to high levels and inspire many people to attract towards single passion. I prefer, to select appropriate and positive commands for encourage, not for disqualify.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rsonality as it was never before. Being a illiterate is not a guilty but having a...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a resource' or simply 'resources'?
Suggestion: a resource; resources
...a illiterate is not a guilty but having a resources for knowledge in a particular field of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...rticular field of aspects is important. now I am coming to my main point, that, it ...
^^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... a lot of pressure into shoulders, take a breathe and just go with the flow. There is not...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'arrived'.
Suggestion: arrived
... in chemistry but when the question was arrive for the physics, he completely denied h...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i feel, i think, in particular, first of all, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69733656174 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64234216277 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56416464891 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8591509935 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8125 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190773712308 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616708143922 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597413839301 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101055654757 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501188389078 0.0645574589148 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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