TPO-14:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of transportation system and the overall improved life quality of people around the world, travelling becomes a popular leisure event. The question of where to travel also becomes a hot debate among the society. Some people believe that they could benefit more from travelling in their own country than from travelling to foreign countries, while the other hold the opposite opinion. As far as I am concerned, I think travelling to foreign countries will bring us more benefits.
First of all, by travelling to foreign countries, we could not only meet different people from different backgrounds, but also experience the different culture that we have never experienced before. By meeting different people from different countries, we have chance to know more about the different values of other cultures, so that we could compare and think more deeper about our own one. Indeed, I think this is a good way to broaden our horizon and let ourselves being more open-minded.
Moreover, traveling to foreign countries could improve one's independence and communication skills. Travelling in foreign countries could be a big challenge to most people because of the language barrier and unfamiliar environment. In order to survive from the trips in foreign countries, travelers must try very hard to learn the foreign language and to communicate with the local people, so that they won't get lost or do the wrong things under the unfamiliar environment. Also, because travelers in foreign countries are all by themselves, without the support of families and friend, they must learn to be independent.
Last but not least, travelling in foreign countries can surprise us by letting us know what ourselves are capable of. Travelling within our own country is like travelling within our comfort zone, if we never jump out of the comfort zone, we would never know our potential skills and what achievement we could make in our lives.
In summary, I think people benefit more from travelling to foreign countries than travelling in their own country because of the special experience they could get from the trips, the chance to improve one's independence and communications skills, and the possibility to explore one's potential skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...res, so that we could compare and think more deeper about our own one. Indeed, I think this...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ling to foreign countries could improve ones independence and communication skills. ...
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Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t from the trips, the chance to improve ones independence and communications skills,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23480662983 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83128149065 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472375690608 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4194760708 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.357142857 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352342894815 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14290484196 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961061642215 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224710129024 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944685424249 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.