TPO 18-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are the guiding lights for every student. They are the real influencers because they play an imperative role in the life of their students and put a lot of effort into supporting students in both their learning and personal development. Not any friend can play this crucial role as a teacher did. I have three main rationales for holding this opinion, which I will develop in the following paragraphs.
To start, a teacher is a primary learning tool for each person from their childhood. They can teach basic education to the most complex ones. Therefore, they must be a source of knowledge for every student and they should be able to convey this knowledge to their student. For example, I have a favorite teacher from my schooltime, who teaches Social Studies. She was my beloved because she knew every aspect of the subject and she was ready to clarify any doubts at any time. This particular subject was the most difficult to score well during my schooling. However, my teacher's dedication and ability to concentrate on weaker students ameliorated my perspective towards social science. Moreover, she gave me additional attention by giving extra classes and notes, which upgraded my grades. Consequently, that interest in the subject made me a Geologist in the future. Not any friend can support us like a teacher in the means of education. As you can see, that teacher paved a path for my future goals.
Secondly, a teacher is not only one who provides information but a good counselor to know everything about their students. My mother is a teacher for the last 25 years and she shared an experience from her teaching experience, which I will explore in this paragraph. Once in her classroom, she noted a student who was ostensibly sleepy and constantly harnessing other students. She called him in person, counseled him, and got to know that he is addicted to drugs and an Anti-hero personality through the movies. She informed parents and through the constant effort of everyone they saved his life from the evil hands of drugs. As a result, my mother got calls from other parents to do motivational counseling for their child to improve their studies. This example clearly illustrates how important a teacher's role in society.
Finally, an effort behind every class they are taking is appreciatable. For instance, my friend is a teacher and I can see her preparations before every class. She was collecting maximum information through various media like the internet, television, radios, newspapers, etc. On top of that, she makes easier examples to make her point clear to the students. Also she is so kind and friendly to the students which made her a real influencer in her student's life.
In sum, I strongly believe that a teacher is always the most important influencer in a student's life rather than their friends. As an approachable person, counselor, and friend a teacher can play various roles which indeed can make the teacher- the most influential person in any one's life.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 802, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ple clearly illustrates how important a teachers role in society. Finally, an effort ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o make her point clear to the students. Also she is so kind and friendly to the stud...
^^^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ways the most important influencer in a students life rather than their friends. As an a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94477317554 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7492805082 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500986193294 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9800501799 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4482758621 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4827586207 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1724137931 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182333185252 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549482050215 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527516412802 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123885992554 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380802764323 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 802, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ple clearly illustrates how important a teachers role in society. Finally, an effort ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o make her point clear to the students. Also she is so kind and friendly to the stud...
^^^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ways the most important influencer in a students life rather than their friends. As an a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94477317554 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7492805082 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500986193294 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9800501799 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4482758621 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4827586207 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1724137931 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182333185252 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549482050215 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527516412802 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123885992554 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380802764323 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.