TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, despite previous decade people can get information from different sources such as internet, TV, Newspaper and so on.

Access to different of information brought ease to human life, for instance in past people in order to be in communication used transferring system which took lots of time, on other hand access to different source of information some time bring problems like spending more time searching one issue on different sources.
As far as my view is concerned I strongly disagree with aforementioned view, I will elaborate my view with following reasons and personal experience:

First, to get information from specific and reliable source has many advantages like it will prevent from waste of time and effort for instance, I was working on my thesis and I used to collected data and information only from specific and reliable sources, this method helped me have more focused on my assignment and also helped me to save time and submit my thesis on time.

Second, internet has provided information in term of quantity, however some time quality of information is not considered for example, my brother has booked hotel and the final price for single room was only 35$, but at the end the hotel charged 25$ more for electricity bill, which was not mentioned in related website. This act make him uncomfortable.
third, different source look at one event from different angle, for instance media support parties, one media may support a news another may reject the same news, therefore to get information from different source may cause confusions, on the other hand using information from reliable sources prevent strike, finding the fact and preventing from loss of money and time.

To sum up, it is always better to rely on specific and trustworthy source instead of wasting time and effort on different sources.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 209, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
Suggestion: $35
...he final price for single room was only 35$, but at the end the hotel charged 25$ m...
^^^
Line 8, column 247, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25'.
Suggestion: $25
...y 35$, but at the end the hotel charged 25$ more for electricity bill, which was no...
^^^
Line 8, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t mentioned in related website. This act make him uncomfortable. third, differen...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Third
...ite. This act make him uncomfortable. third, different source look at one event fro...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11221122112 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74644970494 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.42754736 48.9658058833 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.285714286 100.406767564 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.2857142857 20.6045352989 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4285714286 5.45110844103 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201756466136 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853058286724 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581868530559 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958763847866 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430155468809 0.0645574589148 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 11.7677419355 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.1575268817 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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