Successful people are always appreciated by others. It is helpful to know what attributes of these people are and try to copy these useful characteristics. Some state that successful people try new thing and take risks. I agree with this statement because of the following reason.
First, in a fast-changing world, by being successful, people need to be flexible. Technologies and science are developing fast. The requirement of a job market will change and employers will need skills which correspond to this changing. So, people need to develop a wider range of experience and skills to adapt to this situation. People who try new thing need to increase their knowledge and their skills. As a result, they are more flexible and more adaptable than others for this changing. On the other hand, people who do the same thing and have limited skills may lose their job because those skills don’t request by employers and society. For instance, I remember when computer entered Iran, many people didn’t know how to use it. So, only people who learn it sooner than others could get more opportunities and got a better job.
Second, trying new thing and taking a risk, successful people have more talents and skills than others. People who try new thing, have to develop their knowledge. In some cases, they have to create something. So, their talents will flourish and develop. For instance, Mark Zuckerburg who is a founder of Facebook was a computer engineer. At first, he wanted to write a social network only for his university. But, he developed that from all over the world and now Facebook is one of the biggest social networks in the world. He is one of the successful people in the world because he develops his talents. During his work, he received a heavy criticism by others. But, he took a risk and didn’t stop working and finally he got to succeed.
Finally, successful people cause fundamental changes in our society. They are recognized as a prosperous people because they improve a quality of life in communication or invent something that facilitates doing a task in industrial. For example, Edison invents electricity that causes many changes in the world leading advancement in industry and society.
To sum up, trying to do a new thing and taking risk is the main characteristics of successful people. Doing new thing cause these people be more flexible than others, their talents and their abilities are flourished and they cause improvement in the quality of life their criteria society
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...cause improvement in the quality of life their criteria society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, as a result, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98815165877 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75563482362 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478672985782 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1292801881 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1785714286 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46428571429 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264941717486 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752795492036 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726704428372 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172695041209 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707876225176 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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