TPO 23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Dissecting everything you have done plays significant role in any work. I feel this way for several main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, individual will be able to circimvent any risk by examining the work that the person have performed, which helps to work in planned manner. Moreover, worker will avoid any bigger problem which might be caused by simple problem. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I was working for a research project that one of my professors assigned. While other graduates was handing their work early, I was only finishing the half of it because I was studying the topic in detail. Afterwards, when I finish and receive the grade I expected, other students were rewriting their project because professor considered their assignment is not satisfactory. In other words, they ended up spending much more time on the study because of hurridness.
Secondly, person who is dissecting the job will be able to improve it efficiently because they will add more necessary things while finding for mistakes. Individual will detect some way that will elaborate or develop their job. For instance, friend of mine was studying mathematical formulas carefully because he did not want any risk. Therefore, he started studying additional books and theorems so that he can solve problems without any mistake. Thanks to his attitude towards mathematics, he started competing in mathematic competition. In other words, he improved his ability while trying to perform better job.
Finally, if person work in careful manner rather than rapid way, he or she can work by plan because there will rarely be unplanned things caused by one's mistake. For example, when I was younger, I tend to do everything briskly in order to save time, which is likely to cause more unwanted problems. Thereby, I hardly planned things to do because I was being required to make things again in light of fails made by me.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people need to be careful regardless of time they consume. This is because people can improve quality of job and oneself and can work in planned manner.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98901098901 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66059479101 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5713063907 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123802296758 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388648597439 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444471704384 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786752736129 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452619011176 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.