TPO 23 :
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
In today’s modern era, reliability is one of the outstanding concern in human's life. It may influence time, cost and other factors in every work. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this concept is what is the best balance in the speed-dependability tradeoff. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that people should make sure that all of their decisions are correct, then progress gradually, while others look at this through a different lens. As I am concerned it is better to do works promptly because nowadays not only have works competition increased, but also the whole world is changing faster. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
The first reason that should be mentioned is the increase in population intensify competition in jobs. The more population, the more candidate for each job or work. In this condition, if one does not work quickly, rivals could defeat him. For example, in the imaginary situation that two company are trying to introduce a new product to market. One of them work precisely and double check every steps to become sure about the accuracy of every decision. In contrary, other company progress quickly and produce that production as soon as possible, starts to sell it and gain market share. At this moment, the first company must compete with a well-known opponent with a lot of customers. Consequently, the chance of triumph reduces by expanding the time of each work or project.
A further more subtle point is these days, because of rapid growth in technology and ease of communication, the world alters more swiftly. So both the taste and preference of people change rapidly. Everyone can perceive this phenomenon by looking at clothes fashion. In the ancient world, a customary cloth has used for hundreds of years, but these days after a few years people prefer neither the color nor the model of old products. For this reason, if a work has been done gradually, it may have been expired at the moment. So it is better for each project to done with few problems, instead of done when it is not interesting for customers anymore.
To summarize, because of intensified competition and rapidly changing the interests of humans, people should do their works as soon as possible, besides squandering time for increased reliability. Who prefers to work slowly and lose his job?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apidly changing the interests of humans, people should do their works as soon as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01515151515 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81406509356 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6699083006 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19204882239 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511591957937 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487881374267 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114387580386 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386855443941 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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