TPO 26:
Agree/Disagree:It's better for children choose jobs that are similar to their parent' jobs than to choose job that are very different from their parents' jobs.
Choosing a job or career is one of the most difficult decisions that young people have to make at one point in their life. Some people prefer to have the same job as their parents. Other people decide to follow their own passion or calling. In my view, I disagree with the opinion that it's better for children to choose a job that's similar to their parents' job. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, children might not have the same natural talents as their parents, which would make them struggle to achieve equal success if they opt for the same field of their parents. Some positions require intrinsic abilities of communication, for instance. Other posts, on the other hand, demand strong math skills. Since children's personal skills are not the same as their parents', it's not always practical for kids to follow the same path that their parents took. My own experience is a compelling example on what I mean. After finishing high school, I was trying to make up my mind on what college should I join. Both my parents were working in healthcare. Consequently, they advised me to apply for a college that would prepare me to practice in the medical field. Although I had passion for engineering and I wanted to study computer science, my parents pushed me to enroll in a pharmacy college. Unfortunately, I did not have the skills that they had to be accomplished in such a career. As a consequence, after graduation, I found it hard to find a job and I wished I had never listened to my parents' recommendations.
Secondly, picking jobs that is aligned with one's interest would be more fulfilling and rewarding. Some Youngsters are not intrigued by their parents' professions and they hope to do something else that would allow them to fully utilize their capabilities. Hence, it's better for children to determine their future career through trial and error until they find their real passion. For example, I had to complete a degree in software development after I graduated from pharmacy school as I imagined myself more satisfied with a career in programming.
Admittedly, landing on a job similar to parents' jobs is attractive sometimes since children would be able to benefit either from their parents' connections, experience or even resources. Nevertheless, children could give up in the middle of the road because they would not feel completely pleased just by doing the same thing that their parents did.
To sum up, I oppose the idea that young people should assume that their parents' occupation would be the best choice for them as they could lack their parents' innate abilities. In addition, choosing a profession according to their own traits and capacities would help them be more successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91543340381 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72244356693 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501057082452 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6080833167 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7083333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326642859567 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992572694737 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099631624603 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218933059622 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673686345221 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.