Throughout the human history, people have been always seek for new life condition and improve their life quality. The fact that people need to have job is undeniable and one should take into account this significant fact that without have a proper job, nobody can live. As a matter of fact, having a job is one of the basic requirements of every matured individual. Thus, people are always putting all their efforts in order to find more opportunities to have a better job. Whether accepting job opportunity at once or waiting until the right time has become a controversial debate between people in every community. As far as I am concerned, there should be a balance between these two affairs. In what follows, I will substantiate my double-side view about this issue.
First off, accepting a job opportunity need numerous consideration. By that I mean, job seekers should take into account the influential factors including the market and their chances to be prosperous in this market. Take a factory for instance; the boss has plentiful offers to initiate new investment on some part of factory. If he does not evaluate the market and the consequence of his choices, he would not have the chance to expand his factory and after a while, he would be failed. An established survey conducted in our country, indicates that the more the evaluation the factors and checking the circumstances, the more chance to be wealthy and successful in business.
Another subtle point which shows the contrast idea for aforementioned reasons is that people should consider their interests and talents. Never does a man be successful unless utilize his talents and genunity to be developed. Thus, if a job opportunity is a kind of parallel with his talents and interests, he should get it immediately. Wasting time would be undoubtedly harmful however he does not have enough experience to keep on the way. He will be thrive and find some ways to pave his way to be successful. For instance, in such a competitive world, where the job position is so difficult to achieve, the efforts and attempts to get the job should be doubled and people have to proof themselves.
To put it briefly, contemplating all reasons and factors, one soon realizes that people have to evaluate the market and contemporary have an eye on their talents and interests in order to be thrived in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, i mean, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90570719603 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84211954012 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518610421836 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1817725927 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.052631579 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286177776208 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911168453199 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500896562127 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170020925709 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580899367394 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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