TPO 28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
education is one of the most important factors in human life. nowadays human life involved with very high technology situation and is so different with pervious generations. Science and technology affected whole direction of life. Some people try to involved more in their children's education. while others do not believe this and not only do not cover these issue and they believe that it soes not need. In my opinion, parents are devoted their free time to help their children and it is so much than past.
First, nowadays, famillies have better economical sitution rather than past, which allow them to spend more time with their children especially in educational matters. families have a lot of more chance to use other educational resources to help thier children in school work. Beside this parents have more education rather than and they are more motivated to teach their next generation. my girl in second grade school and I am familiar with these issue closly. every day after school dismissal, I saw other parents who they talk with their children teacher about lesson and homeworks and every thing beyond that. these behavor were not usual in my childhood. it seems that parents know more the importance of shildrens' education.
second, on the other hand of educational system involved the school teacjhers and educational system tend to share education of children with families. they set an aproach to fulfill this important duty with families company. I read an article about a research which compare two group of students in two different school with two educational system. In one of them children learned only in school and their parents do not involved with education process and in the other one it was a completly combined work between teachers and parents. The research resulted a big improvment in many aspect in children how learned lesson with their families companies. it suggest that this system should be used in all school.
Overally, I see that families are involved with their children education process alot more than pervious and I believe this approach help to have a better and educated youth. they grow up healthier and they willl have better relation with their parents. it seems that every parents should help their children in the school time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11345646438 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47460490298 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472295514512 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0292427462 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286130304574 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945835756436 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636493981604 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20289413971 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258290065476 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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