In the past several years, a number of technological advances have made laser eye surgery more widely available. The procedure uses tiny lasers to alter the surface of the eyeball, significantly improving a patient's vision. In spite of its growing popularity, however, laser eye surgery is a costly procedure. Given the number of problems that may accompany the laser vision correction procedure, it is unlikely that many will choose to undergo the surgery.
The first problem with laser eye surgery is the cost. The process requires sophisticated laser systems, which can cost several million dollars. In order to remain in business, the doctors administering laser eye surgery have to charge patients approximately $1,000 to $2,000 per eye. For many people, this is far too costly.
In addition, there are concerns about post -operative problems, which are issues that may arise after the surgery. There have been reports of the cornea (the lenses at the front of the eye) detaching themselves from the eyes after laser vision correction. Moreover, laser vision correction advertises a quick recovery time, but many patients report taking weeks and sometimes months to heal fully from the surgery.
It also remains unclear how long laser vision correction will last. A number of people have to go back to a doctor just four or five years after their surgery for another procedure. Even worse, others have to receive a second round of surgery just a few months after the initial procedure in order to perfect their vision. For most consumers, the benefit is not worth the risks and costs involved with the procedure.
Both the reading and the lecture are talking about the laser eye surgery and cons and prons of that. The article proposes that this costly procedure has several post operation drawbacks. It is not cost-risk beneficial for people. Conversely, The lecturer callenges the book's information and asserts that those ideas are not accurate. Then he gives us more information to solve the misunderstandings.
First, the reading states that the cost of eye surgery is the first burdon for people. It mentions that one to two thousands dollars out of packet is not affordable for many of people. On the other hand, the professor avers that there is some good news about the advanced new technologies which provides us cheaper technological instruments and eye surgery. In addition, the number of eye surgens increased recently. This lead to more competition between them to attract patients. As a result, the more competition cause decrease in cost of laser eye surgery. He claims that nowdays the cost of surgery is decreased by 30 percent.
Second, the article ponits out that laser eye surgery has some post-operation adverse effects such as cornea deattachment which makes this procedure unfavorable. Controversially, the speaker rebuts this idea by mentioning that the laser eye surgery has not those kinds of adverse effects. He posits that just one case of cornes deattachment has reported which it was related to high presuuser of eye liquid not the laser surgery. He explains that the average healing time for laser eye surgery is liken to other surgeries and it is around coupleo f days.
Third, the article mentions that another problem of eye surgery as the undefined time which that eye correction will last. However, the professor asserts that it is very uncommon that a patient nees surgery again after months or years. He asserts that many cases have had a very good eye sight even after twenty years. He repudiates all the book's information about the eye surgery problems and mentions that the cost is decreasing and post operation side effect is like other surgeries, also the duration of eye correction is very long.
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...ation to solve the misunderstandings. First, the reading states that the cost ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, second, so, then, third, in addition, such as, talking about, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 352.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04829545455 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73895314794 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.101781435 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.85 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202094387348 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659132143427 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416125866747 0.0662205650399 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130193595717 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322744652042 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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