Some people like to work at home, while others prefer to work in the office.
Which do you prefer and why?
Undoubtedly, job is one of the integral part of people's life. We need to work to make a living for our family. It is critical to have the best environment as much as possible in our work environment to have a good life-work balance. While some people think that working remoutely is a wonderful option, I, personaly, believe working in work-place have more advantages for employees. In the following essay I will delve into my reasons to substanciate my standpoint.
First of all, work-place in which we have access to all resources and materials, encourage us to concentrate on doing our task. Work offices or factories encvironment provide employees what they need to do their best continueously and approperiatly. For example, my father work as a financial manager in a big company and to do his job he needs to access to a huge amount of data and specially to a well-developed computer system with sophisticated software, whcih I cann't imagine that my father could have access nowhere except his office. In addition, he needs more supplies like files, printer, and a high-speed internet connection, which makes him to be independent to his office. As we see it is not possible for my father and some other people to work from home.
Second of all, work in accompany with other colleagues in a work-palce provides employees a golden opportunity to communicate with each other directly. Owing to the importance of face to face communication between coworkers, there is high chance that work-flow progresses in a fast and smoth fasion. For example, in the hospital that I work, as a pharmacy intern, everyday hoddule at our farmacy is a good situation to talk about all daily issues around our work condition. Having these short conversations between all pharmacy employees not only helps the flow of information, but also makes a friendly rapport through which the chance of any mis-communication decline sharply. Did we not have this daily meeting, we would face many small and big troubles in our current tasks.
In conclusion, considering all aforementioned details and reasons, I strongly that working in office had more pluses rether than working remoutly. This is because in work-place we have access to all resources and materials that we need to work efficiently and because we can communicate directly through which we can deal with all issues fast.
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...nd big troubles in our current tasks. In conclusion, considering all aforement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02775177077 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535532994924 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8369853755 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.882352941 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280463412859 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101764592972 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736122882447 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180739492668 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343284833073 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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