Some people like to work at home while others prefer to work in the office Which do you prefer and why | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people like to work at home, while others prefer to work in the office. Which do you prefer and why?

The work environment has enormous impacts on employees' self-satisfaction. Whereas some individuals choose the office-work setting, others desire a home-working approach. Frankly, I prefer to do work from home for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, it saves time, which reflects on my leisure and gives me a golden chance to enjoy my life. For instance, I am a full-time working mother, and I have plenty of responsibilities to achieve toward my career and family. I worked in an office for several years; I suffered a lot with the overloaded efforts that I had to do to complete those tasks. Long commuting time was consuming most of my energy and leaving me exhausted and dissatisfied with my performance in both my job and household tasks. However, When I changed my work style to work from home, I was able to finish all my duties with an enthusiastic spirit. I directed all my energy and time to the job, and I accomplished my household chores in time that I was supposed to waste it driving from and into work. Accordingly, I have more time available to enjoy with family and friends, and I can even travel abroad, Whereby I achieve my workload effectively. As you can see, working from home does save time.
Secondly, it saves money, which is another remarkably potential benefit that comes along with remote work for both employees and employers. For example, as I mentioned above, I have changed to remote work, and I found out that I saved a lot of money through various paths. Currently, my cost of living has dropped immensely. I have my coffee and my lunch at home, and I do not spend money on gas to commute or buy as many clothes as before. I even get a higher tax refund for my household expenses. Besides, my salary is even higher because I save a substantial amount of money for my employers. I do not need an office or a space to work in, and I do not cost my employers any operating costs like electricity, stationary, or kitchen and water supplies. So, my company optimizes and minimizes its costs to use it for other objectives. Admittedly, this experience taught me that working from home does save money.
In conclusion, a home-working approach is a better choice not only because it saves time, but also it saves money.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, frankly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68811881188 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87838296127 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527227722772 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8236544317 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252048153284 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091372219451 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856216248245 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194779789629 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123981361212 0.0645574589148 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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