Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, nowadays information is the key ingredient in all human endeavor. We need access to beneficial data in our everyday activities by using internet. It is my firm belief that providing free access to all population is a must for numerous reasons, and i will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, internet allow people to educates themselves, about what is happening aroung their society. Todays most of news are broadcasted live on interned. From health news to breaking news, all type of information are availble on different websites. Needless, people who have acces to internet don't need to spend extra money of cable news or news papers. If majority of population have access to the internet they will be able to understand and manage information coming from around the world. I have to admit that my position to this matter have been profoundly influenced by my family experience. I was born in remote area, where to get the information was not eassy for people in our neighborhood. The cable news were not active and we didn't have an paper to be upto date. My father tried had to purchase the internet and we became connected with the world most people in our are cold come home to contact their family mamber by using email and videocall, and my father use to update evry body about the breaking news, what is happening in the society and around the planet. If the internet was free many people would have been able to make some progress base on the information from the websites.
Second, internet is essential in young people education.All school need great connection to help their students to achieves the high standard of education. Plus, students and parents need free access to internet in order to stay focused on their studies and have access to online libraries that can helps young people to lean and work on their school tasks. Drawing from my experience, as I said in first paragraph, we didn't have the internet when I grow up, it was hard to do my homework and I could just wait to go back to school to ask most of data needed to finish my work. It is different case to day ever student has access to free internet in my village today. The teacher can contact the parents on video call remotely without coming to school. This help parents and teacher to keep communication and help their children to succed. Having free internet is very best tool top advance the education of our children.
To sum up, I strongly think that the authorities must provides the free internet for every habitant because, it help them to have acces to information and also support the excellent ediucation in school and after school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'educate'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77204301075 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57948540248 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501075268817 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1246078685 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163684737483 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548658273084 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455277458106 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109280724903 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397106399467 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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