When it comes the to question of whether parents today are more involved in their children's education than they were in the past, people may have different points of views and provide different opinions and arguments that they find valid and convincing. Personally, I totally think that parents currently have a greater role in their children's education than ever and this is for the following reasons.
To begin with, nowadays children are more vulnerable and exposed to a wide variety of threats and dangers that did not exist before. For instance, the interned is becoming more and more involved in our daily lives. As we are all well aware of, the internet have many dangerous effects on the children comportment and behavior. Don't get me wrong, it is true that the internet technology have made our life easier but it has many advantages as well as the good ones. and the children need their parents guidance and advises to stay on track and away from dark paths. The internet has made it accessible for every user to reach the world from its home and this may include dangerous websites. For example the dark web, which contains pornography, illegal weapons and trafficking, etc. If parents are not there to educate their children and supervise them, there will be no one there.
In addition, the society we live in currently is very competitive and at the same time full of temptations and corruptions. The children, if not being supervised, can easily give in these temptations. Therefore, the parents role must be to inform and keep track of their education, help them in their assignment if necessary to avoid dropping out of school.
To conclude, in my personal point of view, I strongly think that parents nowadays have a more important and urgent role in their children education than they were in the past. The world has become a danger place for children and their parents involvement in their education is essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93313069909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60121289311 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.015759386 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303073589393 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102641765414 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852435745339 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204804881722 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927987093822 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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