The Education education as one of human intelligence hints always has had an important effect on people achievements and successes. Therefore, parents as the most important proponents of children, try to increase this ability in them and help them to improving improve their living. I strongly believe that nowadays parents play a crucial role in the quality and quantity of children learning than the past parents. In the following paragraph, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
First, I think the importance of learning has revealed higher than the past, so fathers and mothers attempt to dedicate more time to for improvement in their children amount of leaning. In the past, many of parents preferred that their children continue the ancestry ancestral job because this was very more important than education for family than education. For example, today parents have make a great effort to prepare the essential equipment and environments which are suitable for learning, such as learning devices, a separate room for studying etc. The main reason for this attitude is importance of the education in children's future job and activities.
Moreover, because of the working conditions and facilities, many of parents have opportunity for spending enough time to spend with their family and so can dedicatedevote some of their own times to help children for instructing and doing their assignments. For instance, generally fathers can come back home evenings and concentrate on children education materialsschool works. But, it is clear in the past, because works were hard and time consuming, of hardship and time consuming of work, parents not only did parents not have enough time to help their children, but also the difficulty of family jobs separated them from other activities such as instruction of children.
Finally, in my view, by as the time goes on, the parents’ knowledge about the school works has been increased, and today's parents have higher educational information than the past, and they can better comprehensively transfer their knowledge to the children. For example, nowadays, many of fathers and mothers have the academic science and can better help their children to learn and solve the scientific problems.
To sum up, I believe today's parents not only do parents have enough time and knowledge to instructs and guide their children's educational activities, but also they take the education into account as an important factor for each successful person. Thus nowadays parents have make a high effort to involve themselves in their children's education then the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29736211031 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8372456551 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501199040767 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2084382552 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.266666667 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276801780295 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112609113151 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566229018125 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180905851532 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283202259454 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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