It is obvious that humans are social creatures who establish different relationships including family, friendship, colleague relations during their lifetime. Without having such as these connections, they cannot survive and improve in their society. People consider various criteria when they decide to make friends because friends play a crucial role in their life. Some people assert that it is better to make a humorous friend, while I believe that being friend with people who are intelligent ones can be more beneficial for them. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think friends have significant effects on humans’ life; thus, it is necessary for them to pay more attention while finding a friend. Intelligent friends have a high level of mental ability and thus they are able to help people to solve their problems. In other words, smart persons can better understand issues and think clearly; hence, they can give their partner some valuable advice and guide them. As a result, it leads them to find the best solution for their problems and to overcome them. For instance, when I was a high school, I faced a problem in solving math exercises, and it took me a lot of time to dealing with it, but unfortunately I could not solve it. Finally, I asked my clever friend for help, and with her assistance I succeeded in figuring out it.
Moreover, generally ingenious human beings are successful and prosperous people in their life and society. Also, undoubtedly friends affect each other due to the fact that they spend most of their time with one another. Consequently, bright friends inspire individuals to make more effort and to work harder in order to compensate their shortcomings. As a result, it causes them to be more successful in their life and it motivates them to attempt to achieve their objectives. For instance, I have an intelligent friend whom I know over ten years. He has had considerable impacts on my life. observing his success in his life has stimulated me to try harder, and in comparison with my normal and ordinary friend, he has had more beneficial influences on making my critical decisions in mu life.
To sum up, in my point of view, making friends with intelligent and innovative humans gives a great opportunity for people to not only get help from them to solve their problems efficiently but also be inspired to try and work harder to fulfill their desires and goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Observing
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Suggestion: try to
...ems efficiently but also be inspired to try and work harder to fulfill their desires an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der to fulfill their desires and goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92326139089 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72837609907 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537170263789 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8717468687 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.052631579 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247110046621 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813565632788 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786681087294 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177538187132 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550514270438 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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