What an important aspect of human beings' lives which plays a prominent role in their prosperities, to a great extent, is education. Although there is a consequence on its indisputable role, the most effective method of improving the quality of education is still a moot point. Germane to this fact, a question which is the matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether high salaries for university professors has a positive effect on the quality of education. Although some people may be on the belief that it is not beneficial, I am personally of the conviction that spending more money on salaries for university professor is indispensable for improving the quality of education for two conspicuous reasons.
One compelling reason giving in favor of this thesis is that it assists professors in focusing on their jobs and teaching students better. To elucidate more this issue, if professors earn a high wage, they can have a better life. Therefore, there will be no problem to occupy their minds, and they will concentrate on providing complete lectures for their classes. For example, one of my friends is studying in Karaj Computer Science. Last week, he told me that his university has a limited budget, and it does not pay the professors a lot of money. Because his professors do not make a huge amount of money, they have to work in other places to compensate this lack of money, and they have, consequently, less time to prepare their lectures for the classes. Hence, their lectures are poor, and students are discontented with those. As you can see, if universities pay the professors enough money, they can perform their responsibilities better.
Another reason which cannot go unnoticed is that professors will help universities in improving the classes. To shed some light on this premise, it is worth pointing out that because the professors can make a great deal of money, they are more likely to help universities in having well equipped classes. A strong incentive for doing this is that they will have requirements for good teaching. For instance, when I was in Tehran studying Electrical Engineering, my linear control professor taught us about controlling of air conditioners. There was an air conditioner in our class connected to a computer for the sake of control. The professor used the computer and showed us how we can employ the theory and control the air conditioner. It really cleared things up. Later, I realized that the professor had bought the equipment for the class to help students in understanding the topic better. This experience taught me that if universities pay the professors more, they will help the universities also in obtaining required things for a good education.
By way of conclusion, I am personally one of the proponents who cites a clear bias in favor of the thesis that universities can improve the quality of education by spending more money to university professors. To recapitulate the reasons, not only will result in teaching students better, but also universities will have well equipped classes. I recommend that all universities pay as much as possible the professors for the job they do.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240963855422 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.161790017212 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0602409638554 0.0866891130778 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0464716006885 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0671256454389 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134251290878 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0413080895009 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98407929715 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0223752151463 0.0309702414327 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00172117039587 0.00188951952338 91% => OK
Determiners: 0.104991394148 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025817555938 0.0209618222197 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3163.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 525.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02476190476 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27619047619 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226666666667 0.174417080927 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148571428571 0.112833075102 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98407929715 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.5454634352 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.875 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1372941421 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.791666667 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.494047619 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.5125 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31564493784 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11898528872 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0886159284864 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472060839726 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163041096313 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116462150244 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723763410501 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40872249925 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0811743471562 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244295115499 0.210909579961 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345059822757 0.0618886996521 56% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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