Having good friends around is an apealing wish that everybody can have. While some believe it is more important to make new friends and have fun all the time, others think keeping old friends is more advantagous. I think keeping old friends is more important and my reasons go as follows.
First of all, old friends have history together. Thus, this makes it easier to know their personality and their behavior. In other words, less misunderstandings and struggles happen with them. Therefore, with less arguments people can have more fun and pleasure. Moreover, due to having more time for evaluation, old friends are more trustworthy and reliable. In fact, old friends usually are better fit for having honest relationship. In other words, time is a good way of assessing the reliability of people. For instance, most people show their real personality and charactristic during time when first impression fades away and reality reveals. Therefore, although making new friends can help the time passes easier ,it can destroy the joy by conflicts and arguments due not knowing each other well.
Also, old friends are familiar to each other and their desire and they come along well. In fact, they can find mutual entertainment and hobby easier. For instance, being with old friends means following the same desire for a long time but new friends may have different desire or taste or even sensitivities that put the relationship in a difficult situation.
Lastly, old friends are more helpful and can give better advice. For example, old friends know more about our weaknesses and strengths. So, their suggestions are based on longlasting friendship and are more realistic. For example, my old friends are always my good and reliable consultants and i can get their advice even from far distance. They showed their behavior during time and i can count on them in any situation. They are for me like a precious gem. On the other hand, new friends do not know me very well and i can not count on their help and support in the time of need. Also, they may not give practical or even convenient advice.
In conclusion, although some prefer to make new freinds for having fun and be happy everywhere and have new experiences, keeping the older friends are more important. Old friends are more reliable and due to having a long history together are more helpful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to happen'
Suggestion: to happen
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63023491038 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48231511254 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8664143465 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8421052632 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295200980818 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121034683598 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811106932466 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211796948106 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611895744488 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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