Working for long time is really hard to people to focused on their job, or to how respond to other people, so in my opinion working on 5 days but in short time is better than working as a 3 days for long time.
First, most of workers in office they just waste the time by sit and talk to other coworkers, and it does not have any benefit for the manager of that office. If they decrease the time of working, it’s helping them to do their work better to use their time and go home sooner to have rest and take care of their children. For example, my mom working as medical office in center of city, every morning she goes to work until 9 at evening after some months the manager decide to hire someone else to help my mom because her mistakes of her typing increase because she gets tired and she can’t have focused on her job, but the manager hire that person they still have lots of mistakes so he think to decrease the time of they are working to 5, after some weeks he understand it’s useful and solve all the problems.
Second, when people working for short time as 5 days, some of them have problem to manage their time to do all the thing and always they have some problems to respond to customers. for example, I am working as a doctor assistant and the rule of his office is working with high speed, and it makes me so tired and almost the day I’m sleepy and sometimes I break some glasses because of that high speed reactions, after that he fired me but that problems never solved.
In summarize, it’s depends on people to how they can work in short time or long time and how they react to hard situations. But the time for rest is more important than the how much you are working, the time work should be normal time in 5 days a week to have more concentrate. And has much more beneficial to managers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...ng as a 3 days for long time. First, most of workers in office they just waste the time by s...
Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
... they still have lots of mistakes so he think to decrease the time of they are workin...
Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
...y are working to 5, after some weeks he understand it's useful and solve all the prob...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...s;s useful and solve all the problems. Second, when people working for short ti...
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
... some problems to respond to customers. for example, I am working as a doctor assis...
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Message: Did you mean 'how'?
...he time for rest is more important than the how much you are working, the time work sho...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, still, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2893982808 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16795080044 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464183381089 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.764597827 48.9658058833 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.333333333 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241363790142 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114207620724 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723421629926 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172918641961 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362862530951 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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