Some people believe that it is better to have a job with a few full time working days in a week, for example, three days per a week; instead of working five days per week for shorter hours. In my view, working full time in three days each week is better than another option. Because we will have enough useful time to do other things and enrich our lives, also our mind will be refreshed every week, hence we can concentrate during the working hours.
First of all, when we work for three days, we can look at our other interests in the rest of the week and improve our lives. Life is not summarized in the work, we should have enough time for doing our interesting things. For instance, traveling, studying other fields, exercising, playing a musical instrument and etc. If we have four vacancy days each week, then we would be able to follow other interests and being a successful person in those fields. For instance, one of my friends that works three days each week started to learn to play the piano; now she is a member of a band and can enjoy her life and earn more money. Therefore, by this way, we can richen our life.
Meanwhile, by having four free days each week, our mind will be refreshed, hence our concentration will increase. The efficiency of our mind and body will increase if we have some free days each week for doing different things. Therefore, our mind will be refreshed during four free days and have better output during three working days. For example, my friend, as I mentioned, works three days each week, is extremely successful in her job and her boss is pleased with her work. Therefore, I prefer to have a job with three working days like my friend.
Finally, having a job with a few working days is very useful for students. Many students have a lot of assignments and should go to university from Monday to Thursday; however, they need money for tuition and other things. Working three days each week, especially on the weekends is extremely useful for them. For instance, when I was a bachelor student, I had a three-day a week job for one semester, that was a pleasant experience for me. Because I am a student yet, I prefer to have a few days job, even if it does not pay well.
In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that states having a job with three full-time working days is more enjoyable than having a job with more working days, but with shorter hours. By this way, I can do other interesting things, have a better performance in my job and can continue my graduation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...t it is better to have a job with a few full time working days in a week, for example, th...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... for shorter hours. In my view, working full time in three days each week is better than ...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...xercising, playing a musical instrument and etc. If we have four vacancy days each week,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49782608696 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40577734844 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417391304348 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9464953314 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5238095238 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412724765608 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166061534606 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102104086046 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292816959497 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596488318912 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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