As the technology progresses, people are more happy with their lives. Advancements in medical science make people to live longer, educational advancements enable them to learn fast, and also advancements in the transportation have eased the people's lives.
Today, people can live longer due to medical advancements. In the past, sick people treated very hard, many diseases had been unknown and many people lost their lives. Whereas, in appreciate of advancement in medical science, people live for long ages. Many diseases have been known and there is medicine for them.
Educational advancements make people more satisfy with their lives. Several years ago, it was very hard for students to study. There was not enough educational facilities, like labs or libraries. But today, people can study much easier. Many universities are equipped with modern and advanced libraries and students can use more articles and books in order to do researches.
Advancements in the transportation make people to live better. In the past, there was no car or subway and if people had to travel by phaetons. Sometime traveling to another country was impossible, whereas today people can move easily from one location to another by cars. They can travel to far away places by airplanes.
Technology has changed a lot from the past and has made people to live better. Medical advancements allow to people to live for long years, advancing in education enable students to learn fast, and also advancing in the transportation system help people to travel much easier. Thus, as the time pass, people are more satisfy with their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...ional advancements enable them to learn fast, and also advancements in the transport...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peopling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: peopling
...live better. Medical advancements allow to people to live for long years, advancing in ed...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...g in education enable students to learn fast, and also advancing in the transportati...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'whereas', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255892255892 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.164983164983 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111111111111 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0639730639731 0.046263068375 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.026936026936 0.0685040099705 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0942760942761 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.03367003367 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74987484551 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0505050505051 0.0309702414327 163% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.043771043771 0.0887237588012 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016835016835 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1616.0 2387.08602151 68% => OK
No of words: 262.0 408.028673835 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1679389313 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381679389313 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24427480916 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164122137405 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114503816794 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74987484551 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 47.462611403 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5555555556 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8534667183 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 38.9830364716 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317065698993 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0872338890779 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0886131111445 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509888016681 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149970705181 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127058711313 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789897321792 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314900621624 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0704576417248 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217537133733 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498066405981 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.