By and large feeling happy or satisfied with life is one of the most principal senses that everyone is seeking, not only do people care about it so much, but also they define their success in life in accordance with this sense. There is a moot point in this case as to when people feel happy in life, todays or past time. An outstanding argument asserts that owing the world rapid changes, people today are less happy or satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. I personally concur with this statement. In what follows, I will attempt to investigate some conspicuous reasons to justify my thesis.
First idea that deserves some words is that majority of people find it difficult to learn new technology. Owing the rapid change in society, life style and work every day a plethora number of new high-tech gadgets and modern devices are being produced and penetrated into people’s lives which it’s essential to learn operating them. Hence, people always have to be update and in search of new things which made life’s tasks much more easy, yet some people that is to say adults and older ones find it hard to learnt working with them. An example will shed light on this statement. Consider a 50 years old single woman who lives alone while her daughter left her for collage. Owing the fact that her daughter doesn’t visits her enough for she expects her mother usage of video call to keep in touch, while she finds it too difficult to operate. Hence, they can’t keep in touch that much and the mother feels desolated and alone.
Second, rapid changes make almost everything obsolete in a short time and it triggers instability. People prefer to deal with known, stable and continues issues while today’s rapid change of technology not only does initiate change of devices which people feel belong to them but also it changes the definition and meaning of some items with people get used to them. Although the majority of this changes makes the life much easier, yet people desire stability in life and have trouble adaption to new definition and meanings. For instance, consider the impact of social media in people’s relationships. Before the proliferation of internet and social media people communicate face to face with real feeling and emotion. Conversely, today although people own a plethora number of friends online, yet the majority of them don’t own real friends who care about in real life.
To wrap it up, I concur with the relationship between rapid changes in today lives with feeling less happy and satisfied with life owing the fact that people don’t desire instability and adaption to it and find it hard to learn about new modern issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...en people feel happy in life, todays or past time. An outstanding argument asserts that o...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to operate'.
Suggestion: to operate
...ives which it's essential to learn operating them. Hence, people always have to be u...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...s and older ones find it hard to learnt working with them. An example will shed light o...
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Line 3, column 919, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n't keep in touch that much and the mother feels desolated and alone. Sec...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... used to them. Although the majority of this changes makes the life much easier, yet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, if, second, so, while, as to, for instance, by and large, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91323210412 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48800794981 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501084598698 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6038045188 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.210526316 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274802337695 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916003559559 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875043083634 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200081044004 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826212982803 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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