Tpo 32-2
us">young people seem always to be naive, imprudent and not well-prepared enough to tackle with the problem and events that are happening in our world. And such a fact may lead some people generate the idea that young people in our current society have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society. however, personally speaking, I can’t share the same cup of tea with them, and I will elaborate my point of view in following paragraphs.
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us">First and the foremost, with the rapid development of the cyberspace, young people now can speak louder on the internet. In the past, only people who have many social resources can let other people hear their voice. however, the era has been fundamentally changed, today you can witness an astronomical amount of young people discuss and exchange their ideas of manifold public events and decisions. Not to mention that many of them have a gift to arouse people’s concern about specific decision by using the social networking media. In this case, no one can deny the contributions made by young people.
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us">Furthermore, the fact that young people now actually have more passion toward the public issues indicates that they are playing an indispensable role in determining the future of our world. For instance, last year there were many employees in gigantic companies complain about a specific rule made by their employers on the internet. The rule is that they were asked to work from 9am until 9pm which violated the labor law. Just after this event being exposed to the public, a great number of young people responded to it immediately, they formed a labor organization which focus on fighting for the right for employees in such companies. Ultimately, the all of these companies apologize to the employees and made compensation to them.
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us">Nevertheless, a voice rises that young people are imprudent and sometimes easy to make mistakes so they may not suitable for making decision for our society. Ironically, this statement suffers both from logical and logical fallacies, the fact is that those mistakes can pave the way to the brighter future of our society. Without them, our society may stay in where it is forever, every progress in our society need us to take risks, not to mention that great historical figures who have changed the history of human also make many ridiculous faults when they are young.
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us">In a nutshell, I maintain the idea that today’s young people can largely influence our society and determine the future of our society. And I believe that my opponents will compromise after being exposed to my article.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21768707483 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07381303461 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514739229025 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0489803068 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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