It is obvious that nowadays with the development of technology, cars play an important role in everyone’s daily life and the number of individuals who are using their private cars is increasing. I strongly believe that it can be predicated that there will be more cars to use in the future than there are today. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my views using some reasons and examples.
I think that the populations of people will increase in the future in comparison to today. As a result, the number of automobiles that will be used by people will rise. Also, the living conditions of people will improve in the next twenty years; hence, more people can afford to buy cars by themselves. For instance, in my country, many years ago, only rich families were able to use their own cars and it was considered a luxurious device, whereas, as times goes on, the earnings and income of people in their lives is rising and thus it helps them to be capable of purchasing private automobiles.
Moreover, I believe that with the technological progress, car industries are trying to manufacture vehicles with high quality and technology. Therefore, it will encourage people to use advanced cars which have higher safety and comfortableness. For instance, in the past because cars had low safety, more car accidents happened, while today prefer to use their cars instead of public transportation system, because they feel comfortable and safe when driving their cars.
Finally, with the development of industries, a large number of people are forced to commute to work. On the other hand, due to the lack of public transportation, they have to use their cars to get to work. Consequently, in twenty years later we witness to increase in cars in the streets. For example, nowadays the majority of factories have been built in the countryside in which people do not have access to public transportation such as buses or subways. Thus, they are compelled to drive their car to their work.
To sum up, it is predictable that more cars will be used in the future compared to today because of the technological and industrial improvement, increase in human populations, and rise in the quality of living conditions of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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...elled to drive their car to their work. To sum up, it is predictable that more c...
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Suggestion:
...quality of living conditions of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94694960212 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91422741065 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496021220159 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4626563393 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5625 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221550587634 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087623024452 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475318197205 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13953136852 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487692697635 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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