Quality of education plays a vital role in the country's own development. It is very essential for the government to spend the nation's treasure in the most efficient way. Some argue that the government should spend money on the education of young children. While others hold the opposite idea that adult's education is more important for better growth of the country so, money should be spent on the development of the universities. As from my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, it is crystal clear that effective and qualified education in the university requires high-tech equipment and facilities compared to the high schools. Undoubtedly, without investing enough money in higher education, it is not possible to achieve the desired growth of the country. For instance, the government in China has invested 30% of nation's money in the development of the universities. Students in China, have access to high-tech laboratories and modern equipment in order to carry out the research projects. Consequently, China has become one of the largest countries in term of technological growth and it also helped them to earn prestige in the whole world. Also, recently the companies from all over the world invested their large amount of money in the Chinese market because of their highly developed technology.
Furthermore, students who belong from the poor economic condition, have rights to pursue their education till high school without paying school fees. But some intelligent students cannot pursue their higher education in universities because they cannot afford the university’s fees. The government can help them by providing a subsidized loan, and they can pursue higher education by paying minimum fees. My own country is a compelling example of this. The government of my county has made some projects from which poor economic students can be able to pursue their higher education to fulfill their dreams. For example, Dr. Abdul Kalam who was belonged from a poor family however, he has completed his studies and become one of the famous scientists in the world. Thus, the government has the power to help the students, so in the future, they can also contribute back to the country the same as Dr. Kalam did himself.
On the other side, the school does not require an extra investment of money in order to educate children. Young children are required to study rudimentary subjects such as sports, drawing, English, math and so on. For example, even though I and my brother have studied from simple low maintenance school, we completed our higher education in the field of medicine only because we had good instructors who taught us and guided us till we graduated. Currently, we both are working as a senior doctor in a private hospital. Hence, the government can hire a more professional instructor to elevate quality education in high schools instead of spending money to equip high schools.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is crucial for governments to prioritize financial support to higher education so that the long-term development of nations can be secured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.0752688172 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84577961742 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501937984496 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 822.6 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0211948952 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.88 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.64 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227570725221 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723547041104 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746222657095 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147304536227 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947922026202 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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