Technologies have improved ourlives and gave us the opportunity to experiance things that were once impossible or unbelievable. However some people think that in the past when these thecnologies were not available it was much easier to identify what job could lead to a secures and successful future. personaly I think that this statment is true for three compelling reasons.
Firstly, jobs weren't as diverse in the past as in today. people in the past had specific jobs or careers, they had to choose between working in agriculture, commerce, builiding and constructing or administration. as a result people used to work in specifique jobs and they all made a living from this jobs that seem today easy or with repetitive tasks. with the development in the domaine of technologies other jobs have been introduced to the world. jobs such as creative manager or big data engineers were never present in the past years. nowadays, a lot of big companies have emerged in all over the world and they need employees to take care of a lot of specific things such as management marketing etc. another consequence to this emergence is the number of employees in each company. while in the past small companies with 5 to 10 employees maximum were the most popular type of businesses, today companies with 1500 to 3000 employees are everywhere.
Secondly, whereas people in the past used to secure successful future from working in small jobs, nowadays it's hard to afford the expensive lifestyle. for exemple my grandfather used to own a bakery, he had 6 or 7 employees and they used to sell bread for people living nearby. my grandfather business was successful enough to raise 7 kids and send them all to college to continue their studies in other cities. the idea behind this example is that in the past everything was available and everything was cheap. college wasn't as expansive as in the present days, vegetables, fruits and crops were available and affordable. However since the economical crisis a lot of thing changed effecting our lifestyles.
lastly, since the introduction of machines a lot of employees has been replaced by a machine. the fact that this machine can do the same work in much more effectiveness led many companies to give up on their employees and install machines in there places. So the majority of people nowadays are trying really hard to learn about many things to be able to get a job that can secure a successful future for them. not mentioning the difficulties that people face in order to build a family. the berden of starting a family scares a lot of adults since they barrely afford their own expanses. a good example of this phenomenon is the decline of marriages in japan. a lot of japanese people live and die alone because they are always busy and working hard to be able to secure a good future.
All things considered, we are going towards an expansive world where the machine is replacing the human beings in 80% of the jobs, only creative and hard working people will get the chance to find a job to secure a future
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t were once impossible or unbelievable. However some people think that in the past when...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personaly
...ead to a secures and successful future. personaly I think that this statment is true for ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...ee compelling reasons. Firstly, jobs werent as diverse in the past as in today. peo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ent as diverse in the past as in today. people in the past had specific jobs or career...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ing and constructing or administration. as a result people used to work in specifi...
^^
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ue jobs and they all made a living from this jobs that seem today easy or with repet...
^^^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...em today easy or with repetitive tasks. with the development in the domaine of techn...
^^^^
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Jobs
...jobs have been introduced to the world. jobs such as creative manager or big data en...
^^^^
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...s were never present in the past years. nowadays, a lot of big companies have emerged in...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...he number of employees in each company. while in the past small companies with 5 to 1...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...hard to afford the expensive lifestyle. for exemple my grandfather used to own a ba...
^^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...to sell bread for people living nearby. my grandfather business was successful eno...
^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...continue their studies in other cities. the idea behind this example is that in the...
^^^
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: College
...was available and everything was cheap. college wasnt as expansive as in the present da...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...lable and everything was cheap. college wasnt as expansive as in the present days, ve...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd crops were available and affordable. However since the economical crisis a lot of th...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...lable and affordable. However since the economical crisis a lot of thing changed effecting...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 660, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...le. However since the economical crisis a lot of thing changed effecting our lifestyles. la...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...ng changed effecting our lifestyles. lastly, since the introduction of machines a l...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ployees has been replaced by a machine. the fact that this machine can do the same ...
^^^
Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...an secure a successful future for them. not mentioning the difficulties that people...
^^^
Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...people face in order to build a family. the berden of starting a family scares a lo...
^^^
Line 7, column 590, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...they barrely afford their own expanses. a good example of this phenomenon is the ...
^
Line 7, column 662, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...n is the decline of marriages in japan. a lot of japanese people live and die alo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2537.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79584120983 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73012108328 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48393194707 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.9 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6181776461 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.48 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.16 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139611008047 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402518744626 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048750073914 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800782821506 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519007885691 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.