It is generally believed that successful future mainly depends on the type of a career that a person makes. In this regard, personally, I am prone to believe that nowadays it is less predictable whether a certain kind of job will lead to a success or not. I hold this opinion since today more people may acquire excellent education; and there is no political stability in the national states.
To begin with, there are more possibilities to enter and graduate from higher educational institutions today than it was in the past. Primarily this is due to the fact that higher education is developing all over the world, and there are more and more institutions suggesting proper education. Furthermore, more people may gain necessary for their career knowledge and skills since it has become easier to pay for education through various funds, by taking student loan, and so on. This in turn makes the competition in the job market harsher. For example, a few decades ago it was enough to graduate from law faculty of university in order to have guaranteed for the whole life occupation and, therefore, successful future. At present, there a lot of lawyers who simply cannot find a job. So, the competition between the specialists explains the fact that making a career in not a predictable thing nowadays.
Additionally, now there is no political stability in the world and in the national states. Practically every day our national governments face more and more problems that they have to deal with. And if the national political powers are not being able to resolve the issues, they are often being changed by other political parties. These kinds of situations harm the stable life in our countries and make our professional route more complicated. For instance, in my country every time new forces come to the power they fire specialists who had worked with the previous governments and hire new ones. Consequently, there is a cause-effect-relationship between political stability and making a successful career.
To sum up briefly, our life is hectic. Nowadays it is harder to make a successful professional career since the job market competition is harsher and more and more factors influence stability and predictability of our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...successful future mainly depends on the type of a career that a person makes. In this reg...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 911, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er in not a predictable thing nowadays. Additionally, now there is no political ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0539083558 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04486305059 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536388140162 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4675241069 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101340594452 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340347604104 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309925963286 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655604249631 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232920238473 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.