In this society, some people argue that workers are more satisfied when they have many different kinds of tasks to do. It seems justified since always doing the same job is completely boring. However, I belief that when considering about the difficulties to study new techniques, make money and find new jobs with better condition, it is safe to make the conclusion that workers prefer to do the similar tasks all day long.
Undeniably, it has been widely accepted that learning new things is a hard job, especially for workers. If they are asked to do various tasks, they must spend huge amount of time learning them; meanwhile, they still have to finish the tasks they are doing now. In this case, both their mental and physic will feel tired. This point can be best illustrated by the case of my brother. Last year, he learnt to be a painter of motorbikes while he was still working as a worker helping packaging motorbikes. Therefore, my brother only could read technique books and practice painting at night. That was a hard time for him. After successfully changing his job to paint motorbikes, he became ten kilograms lighter.
Besides, it is much easier to earn money by doing the same tasks. Traditionally, people spend less time in doing what they are used to, which is also true to workers. For example, my brother, who I mentioned above, used to work as a packaging worker for 5 years. So he was familiar with the working process. He told me that he packing the objects without thinking and even he could do this without eyes open. Thus, the amount of motorbikes he packaged was always twice as those who were new comers. As a result, he earned twice of them.
More importantly, it is easier to change a job with better condition because of doing the same tasks. My brother thought that with two abilities, he could find a better job. However, when he was looking for a job, the company still hired him as a packaging worker for he was familiar with the job. The company did not care about his ability to painting since he was not doing it as well as packaging. As a contrary, the leader of the company paid him much more than before thanks for his prompt and excellent pack skill. That is because that my brother had doing this for 5 years. Therefore, always doing the same tasks makes it easy to change a job with better salary.
In conclusion, considering about the difficulties to learn a new technique, make money and change job, doing the same tasks satisfies the workers more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rkers are more satisfied when they have many different kinds of tasks to do. It seems justifie...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...me job is completely boring. However, I belief that when considering about the difficu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64494382022 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46813399013 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487640449438 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2829749857 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1153846154 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222719593492 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641344908089 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946804364081 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163988228571 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10169863035 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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