In such a civilized society, in spite of several disagreements, people have in various areas so far as one's view goes, one point that virtually everybody approves upon is the importance of work through our lives. This is mostly owing to the fact that people should work in order to survive. With this in mind, a broad range of controversial attitudes might stimulate heated debate as to whether workers will be satisfied by accomplishing various tasks during their workdays or not. I personally believe that most of them want to face numerous tasks. Among the many reasons one can give in this regard, two conspicuous reasons will be investigated through ensuing lines.
The first and foremost reason which comes to the mind is that doing different tasks is not so tedious. In other words, workers do not want to repeat the same task whole the time because their brain becomes more tired due to a huge amount of concentration on a specific task. Take an example of a worker in a wire fabrication company who is responsible for doing high accomplished works with more technological and perilous apparatuses. If this worker does this skill alone during the day, his brain will become more tired and as a result, it is possible for happening of unfavorable consequences like injuries in their body. On the other hand, let’s suppose the same worker with the responsibility of numerous skills, not only the worker is avoided of these kinds of hazards but also there is an opportunity for him to relax and refresh his brain in the period of altering a specific task. Therefore, a vast of majority of workers want to have various tasks through the day.
Another point which deserves some words here is that a great number of workers want to know and familiar with different tasks because of the fact that it gives an opportunity for them to become more productive. for Instance, in the same example, if a worker of a site will become absent in a day, other workers can be substituted and replaced and thus the company will continue to its production rate that is the most important facet of a company. It goes without saying that, doing more tasks has another advantage for workers due to the amount of salary which they gained monthly. In other words, by having numerous tasks, the salary will be increased compared with doing a single task due to the difficulty of each specific task. According to a recent but reputable study conducted at the Sharif University of Technology among a huge number of workers, selected from different companies and industrial power plants of my company, it was found that 89 percent of workers are satisfied with having various tasks because of the amount of their gained money.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons which can be persuasive enough that workers want to accomplish and experience various works during their workdays. I highly recommend that a study should be done in order to elaborate the main reasons for this matter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...attitudes might stimulate heated debate as to whether workers will be satisfied by accomplish...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... know and familiar with different tasks because of the fact that it gives an opportunity for them to bec...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ity for them to become more productive. for Instance, in the same example, if a wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84282907662 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6548208543 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487229862475 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4231157928 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.944444444 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2777777778 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264463503704 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944764395751 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677790418464 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155141513767 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855634095754 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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