Workplace is one of the important part of everybody’s life. People spend most of their time in their work. So having a pleasant and desirable workplace is very practical and useful for having a healthy life. I completely agree with the idea of making many different types of tasks during workday for employee other than similar tasks all day long.I think this action helps to have more satisfied worker.
First of all, However some believe variety reduces the concentration and focus in the work, I think having different tasks makes variety and prevent from tiredness and being bored by employees. For example, when I want to do a task for a long time during a day usually I feel tired and cannot concentrate. By changing the task, I can focus better. In fact, in my opinion variety lessens the tiredness and brain can focus better by switching to different task.
Moreover, some work need special physical activity like sitting or bending or typing or walking or repetitive work which in long run could be very boring and also even painful for the body. Thus, changing the type of task reduces the pressure of that task on the body . For example, most of the worker in the big companies train their employees for learning different task .This makes the workplace more desirable and healthier. They can tolerate their workdays more comfortably and put up with tough part of their responsibility easily.
Lastly, when the workers do different tasks, in the time of their day off, the employer can find better substitute for their task. More workers know that task and everything is more manageable for the team.
In conclusion, although some believe different task reduce the concentration, I think doing different tasks each day is more desirable for workers. Variety makes less pressure in their body and due to not being bored they can focus better in their responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93396226415 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63918940253 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1324669532 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0625 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342623809587 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125611849121 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991645793023 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221849710998 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284574777768 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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