In this era, work satisfaction is one of the decisive factors which an employee determines whether to take the job or not. In order to possess more work satisfaction, some employees prefer to perform different tasks instead of doing similar tasks during a workday. However, others feel more comfortable when they have to perform similar tasks. I am, and probably will always be, one of those who agree with such an idea that employees who perform a variety of tasks during a workday are more satisfied. In the following lines, I will elaborate on the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, employees with diverse works to deal with during a workday are more productive and durable. Indeed, the monotony of work makes employees bored and they just want to perform some other works for a while and then back to the first one. For instance, I remember, I had been working for a business company just for a couple of months. My duty was that I had to answer costumer’s calls for all day long; in addition, I had never been allowed to perform other things. After a while, I made my decision to quit the job; because it made me bored and depressed and also it was not the job I searched for that. Studies show that workers are more vulnerable to quit their jobs when they feel less productivity and work satisfaction due to the monotony of work.
Secondly, employees will be more enthusiastic to perform diverse works. I mean, an employee may not enjoy doing a specific task but he or she will do it perfectly beside other enjoyable tasks. For example, after I quit my job in the business company, I hired in a kid school. The manager has assigned me both teaching students and making appointments between kid’s parent and the school. Unfortunately, I never enjoy the second task. On the other hand, I love kids and playing with them. Hence, we always have fun times with each other. This matter has caused I feel exciting more and more for performing my another task. Until now, I have always been satisfied with my job.
To put it briefly, based on the reasons I mentioned above, the more diversity works have, the less possible the workers quit their jobs. Not only can workers experience different tasks but also they will be more exciting and durable to perform their works. therefore, I highly recommend young people to search for a job with different challenging tasks instead of a fixed task during a workday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ing and durable to perform their works. therefore, I highly recommend young people to sea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74117647059 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60089524114 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501176470588 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7685497865 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5909090909 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3181818182 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04545454545 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253697718506 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764627728228 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792670638557 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178501028591 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675243054507 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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