Acknowledging that both having fun by playing and doing things with children are crucial to parents, but many parents choose the later over the former. However, I strongly believe that it is advisable for parents to spent the time to have fun with their children.
Foremost, the relationship between parents and children can be strengthened by playing games or sports. When they play together, parents and children must communicate frequently providing an opportunity for them to know each other. Take my personal experience as an example. When I was a child, my father always play basketball with me. I talked a lot about my school life and shared little secrete with him. Lots of troubles I met were readily settled down with his help. I learn lots of things beyond the textbook form him. So. I always consider my father as my super hero when I was young. At the same time, those happy times we created had became the most valuable memories between us. On they contrary, if you spend the time on tutoring your children, maybe you would be driven crazing, making the relationship worse, for most children hate homework so much.
In Addition, parents also could benefit from the games or sports. As you can see, todays' modern citizens are facing fierce competition exerting much pressure on them. Everyone seems to be fighting for survival. They are experiencing unusually burdens. Choosing spending their limited time by playing with their children definitely could help them to relax themselves. By the contrast, things relating to schoolwork required patience, and you must keep focus on what you have teach to your child avoiding to make mistakes. Therefore, you just can't get a minute to break.
Admittedly, spending time to play has its own flaw. If children are already can not catch up with the class. It may be better to help him to finish home works at first. However, for a long term plan, spending time to do thing is of fun is more meaningful.
As spending time on recreational activity presents a window into the relationship among family and help parents relax themselves after work, it is advisable for parents to gear up and have un with their chidren.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... time, those happy times we created had became the most valuable memories between us. ...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to spend'.
Suggestion: to spend
...xperiencing unusually burdens. Choosing spending their limited time by playing with thei...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...nd you must keep focus on what you have teach to your child avoiding to make mistakes...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...g to make mistakes. Therefore, you just cant get a minute to break. Admittedly, s...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...spending time to play has its own flaw. If children are already can not catch up w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9027027027 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59110689011 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.202553394 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5833333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321771674023 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843177483931 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812790147702 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198807207573 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715563681555 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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