TPO 47- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the quick development of technology and mass media provided all strata of people with accessibility to different news resources. For instance, news of different categories including political, science, sports and so on are available on the internet and people can browse the news quickly. In this regard, there is a question that whether it is important to know all events occurring around the world or not, regardless they will have any effect on your life. I believe this issue is of importance due to some reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
Tracking news, especially political news, broaden people's viewpoint toward political issues all around the world and indirectly affect their life. Every day on news channels commentators analyze the political events from different aspects and argue about potential consequences on the global situation. Following political news help people to enhance their reasoning power and problem analysis. Hence, this issue indirectly affects their lives and they would be able to consider their own problems from different views and analyze and address them. Also, when people have deeper political knowledge, which is gained through following the news and interpretations, they would be able to make a wiser decision in their country's elections and choose a candidate who can adopt good foreign policies which would be beneficial for the future of their country.
Secondly, nowadays lots of violence are occurring around the world. For instance, most of the middle east countries are involved in the war and lots of civilians are killed by mass destructive weapons. Tracking international news makes us aware of what is happening around the world do our human duty related to these catastrophes. For example, people from other nations can help the war-torn people by their philanthropic aids. Also, by participating in protest marches they can show their opposition against militaristic policies of some countries. In some cases, these activities make the political authorities to retreat from their hostile position.
The last point to be mentioned is that news is a great source for enhancing general knowledge. Each day news channels broadcast the latest development in the sphere of science, technology, art, and sports. Tracking the news provides an opportunity for you to be up to date and increase your knowledge and it has an indirect effect on your social life in the long run. When you have broad knowledge in different areas, you have a lot to say when you are with your friends and you can easily start a conversation with others and even make new friends as knowledgable and sociable people attract more friends.
For short, I strongly believe that watching the news and knowing what is happening all around the world is of importance as it will broaden your horizon from a political perspective, it leads to civil activities, and improve social life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23628691983 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81980000248 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9514921073 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.19047619 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192666736688 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596058161947 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643815262504 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124636982588 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464440583994 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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