Being aware of the events around us especially on a global scale is particularly important to lead a balanced knowledgable lifestyle. Without it, we could end up in very unpleasant situations and, besides having outdated information, regretting that we missed our chances to increase our general knowledge and experiences.
First, it is of utmost prominence nowadays to be aware of what is happening in the world simply because it may be an indicator of our general knowledge. People can judge us easily by measuring how much we know, and therefore, have a major impact on our social life. I remember one day, for instance, when my American friend was asked by some Arab guy about his opinion on the terrible war taking place in the Gulf countries. My friend replied naively by saying that which war are you talking about? My friend was simply unaware that Saudi Arabia was bombarding Yemen all day and night for around two years or so. Bottom line, the Arab guy was shocked and kind of reprimanded the American guy for his "illiteracy", let alone the negative statements he spit out against the American people altogether. Not to say that the Arab was right about his attitude towards the American; such an event and the like are unnecessary that could lead to a generalization about some societies due to a single misinformation
In addition, assuming that being unaware of what's going on in the world won't affect our daily life, it does not mean that it won't affect our lives in the long run. It exactly like a snowball effect, if you keep on ignoring global news about anything like politics, economy, science, history, or whatever major issues, you will just end up having sort of a displaced mind being present in a location but disconnected from time and space, so to speak.
Moreover, keeping up with global news and event is especially pivotal to broaden our experiences in life. It particularly positively improves our critical thinking ability; a trait that I think we all need mostly to be able to tackle the hardship of our daily lives.
To sum up, I do agree that we should be aware of what is happening around the world as it provided us with a plethora of advantages including but not limited to broadening one's knowledge and experiences and being continuously updated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, sort of, talking about, so to speak, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8578680203 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87243270481 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.088670184 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.230769231 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3076923077 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157464875405 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559581969619 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388317592297 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877325120975 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300854631815 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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