From the last few years world has been embracing several innovations in the field of technologies, and many disasters are occurring in different parts of the world. As the burgeoned of science and technologies, it has made world a small place by spreading its news through social media, television and news-paper instantly in a minute. As far as I am concerned, it is eminent to know what is happening around the world as it not only inform us about the news but also help us directly or indirectly.
At first blush, World has emerged in large extinct and it has reached towering in finding new things and inventions of various technologies. Indeed, people has discovered another planet; Mars, where the scientist of NASA consider the possibility of life as they figure out that there is a presence of water vapour. For the supporting instances, in October 2017, Robert Sophia was announced The World's First Robert to title the citizen of any country. She has travel around the world by exploring its artificial intelligence invented by Hanson. Therefore, such information are crucial to know what are happening around the world.
Admittedly, news around the world alert us in various ways. They support us to saves other people life. For example, there has been war from the last seven years in Syria and western country. Recently the rebel side's America and France use the chemical weapons in one part of Syria which killed many children and adults. When people around the world knew about this event, they had gone to Syria to rescue people and endorse their situations. Also, in my country Nepal, there had occurred earthquake where many people died, and people from around the world helps us, thereby overcoming those situation.
In fact, the news around the world assist us to know about the economy of the country. The amount of currencies value decide the rate of jewellery in different parts of the world. Moreover, the fight between the United States and Canada had creates increase in the cost of the goods. For an instance, the arrival of hurricane in Florida caused the petroleum gas to the maximum height in cost. Even though those news are not about their countries, but it aids people to know about the cost of various economic goods around the world.
In conclusion, the World's has lessened in size as the technologies escalated. It is very useful to know what are happening around the world as it gives the information about the catastrophic disaster around the world, economy and new innovations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
... the world helps us, thereby overcoming those situation. In fact, the news around the world ...
Line 7, column 406, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...the maximum height in cost. Even though those news are not about their countries, but it a...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93427230047 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57901216625 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516431924883 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4032193473 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.095238095 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195068297051 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660382313963 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566772563193 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125510058661 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253761175538 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.