TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
In today's life, it is inevitable not to be aware of events taking place in parts of the world. We are all in touch with newspapers, televisions and social networks were the news scatter as easy as pie. Some people think to be aware of what is happening inside today's world episodes it crucial in human life, while others disagree with it. In my view, I believe that it is necessary for us to be aware and cautious of what is happening in another continent of the world which I will explain the reasons hereunder.
First, if we know the events about past and present, we can learn from them and also prepare ourselves for in countering such a situation namely, wars, shortage. For instance, ISIS is the excellent demonstration of knowing the events. When first ISIS started invasion to other countries if other counties were unaware of such a group, not only they were not prepared to neutral the incursion, but also they would have a significant loss of people, towns, and culture. As a result, they would be unable to protect their county and help other counties to prevent this group from the decimation of culture, towns and also raping innocence women. As we can inference, being aware always helps us to be wary, cautious and making the best choice.
Second, there is an excellent verse by one of my countries best poet "Hafez" which he says "humans are a part of each other if an organ is in pain, the other ones are also in pain too." I believe that if we are knowledgeable on what's happing around us, we can give each other a hand in the hard times and also, pave the way as much as we can in the hardships. Taking the example of current days earthquakes in my country, where people from all over the world sent help to the people that this disaster happens to them, like sending them money to build their house, the cloth to wear in the cold weather and sustenance they need to live. By thinking about the assertion belief and the sense of humanity I claim that it is a vital role of all humankind to help each other in the hard time and this is only possible if we get to know the occurs happening in-universe.
Eventually, people should try to compete with each other to get improved. Being aware of other countries sophistication and new achievements make people try for becoming better and attain more than yesterday; while being unaware of others results in stagnations. Consequently, by striving for better achievements people will get better customer services and better livelihoods standards.
All in all, being aware of events of episodes happening in the world will provide us significant benefits like those mentioned above and improve the quality of humans and the sense of humanity and precautions which are the essential factors for having a world of better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'countries the best'.
Suggestion: countries the best
...here is an excellent verse by one of my countries best poet 'Hafez' which he says &a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...believe that if we are knowledgeable on whats happing around us, we can give each oth...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...r to get improved. Being aware of other countries sophistication and new achievements mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, while, for instance, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70325203252 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64182923045 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489837398374 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7970976243 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.625 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115781194633 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468608277867 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354171147525 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731660947496 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405875323377 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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