There is a general concern about how young people enter the society when they reach to a point that they should be independent from their parents. Almost all people agrees with the importance of having the ability to plan and organize. As the time goes, the life becomes more complex and it causes people to think that because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
The first and foremost reason for young people to have the ability to plan and organize is that they are old enough to be dependent from their families and they should adapt themselves with the new stage of life they are going to experience. In fact, they should learn how to plan for their future and how to be organized in their works, studies,etc. Additionally, most young people are immature and they should learn how to do the planning for their future. I experienced a similar situation last year. Last year, I was going to be dependent from my parents and leave in a new house. I had no plans on how I can manage my life by myself and I experienced serious problems. Thus, I went back to my parents and tried to learn the ability to be organized.
The second thing that supports the mentioned idea is that if young people do not learn the ability to plan and organize, they will face serious problems. The first problem is that they cannot find a job eventhough they have some skills. In fact, nowadays job interviews are testing people's abilities such as planning, thinking, etc. So if young people do not have the ability to plan, they will not pass any job interviews. There was a study at the University of Tehran last year. A group of researchers went to different kind of job interviews and they came up with an interesting result. Almost all jobs tested their ability to organize. Hence, this ability is essential for young people who are seeking a job.
Just like anything else, this idea has some drawbacks, too. The major drawback of this idea is that it takes a lot of time and energy for young people to learn the ability to plan. In fact, they should learn how to organize their works and this will be hard for themselves in these ages. Moreover, there should be some experienced teacher who can teach them. Therefore, young people should pay for learning the planning ability and this will be so hard for them.
To sum up, I think the ability to plan and organize is essential for the young people and in my opinion, the reasons are powerful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
... to be organized in their works, studies,etc. Additionally, most young people are im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, i think, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56097560976 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38549606826 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414634146341 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5287048493 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7083333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7916666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312057147739 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108648027785 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109637290868 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220832975658 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11195615474 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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