There is no gainsaying that modern life is more complicated that past. Young people should have plenty features and characteristics for having a successful life. In my opinion, the planning and organizing are important to be successful in each stage of life in modern life.
When young people want to attend to university, he/she should make decision for choosing her major. However, in the past, there were some limited studying fields. Young people should plan exactly what they want. Then, they should plan to be graduated. They should be organized for studying hard and working in part time jobs at the same time. Therefore, young people cannot graduate from university, if they have no plans for studying and earning money for university tuition.
Job market is a competitive market these days, while people just were occupied some simple works like gardener, carpenter and etc. These days, there are various jobs in market. Young people should make a wise decision for choosing their jobs based on their talents and interests and then plan some exact steps for being qualified for obtaining jobs. For example, a person who wants to work in financial markets, she should have a university certificate and some professional certificates. If people have plan and organizing, they are capable to obtain these certificates. Therefore, young people should have proper plan and organizing for being successful in job market.
These days, people are occupied and they do not have enough time for wasting. They should plan for having good vacation, holidays, trips and etc. In better words, if people especially young people want to enjoy the life, they should be organized. For example, in some specific holidays, all the plane tickets are sold out and people, who want to trip by plane, should cancel their trips. In other words, the great majority of people plan for their holidays to trip, therefore who has no plan, should cope with plenty problems for buying tickets, hotel booking and etc. Hence, young people should be organized for enjoying their lives.
In a nutshell, modern days circumstance imposes its' specific rules and one of the most important rules, is having plan and being organized.
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 52- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars 3
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- TPO 48 Writing IndependentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
- T-P-O 34 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
...anized for studying hard and working in part time jobs at the same time. Therefore, young...
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: AND_ETC
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
...e simple works like gardener, carpenter and etc. These days, there are various jobs in m...
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
...ofessional certificates. If people have plan and organizing, they are capable to obt...
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: AND_ETC
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
...r having good vacation, holidays, trips and etc. In better words, if people especially y...
Line 7, column 561, Rule ID: AND_ETC
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
...blems for buying tickets, hotel booking and etc. Hence, young people should be organized...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13019390582 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50226376739 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487534626039 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9618641688 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4090909091 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228166095207 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929851506148 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554724674483 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15469585677 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047116390218 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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