TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Since the dawn of humanity it is crucial for people to manage their life. However, some people would like to do their jobs haphazardly but, in my opinion having plan in your life can improve you. In what follows I will delve into some outstanding reasons and examples that can aptly substantiate my view point.

One of the most striking reason that I should take into account is that with organization individuals can use their time in order to reach their goals easily. In other words, if people manage their time they can work more and make more opportunity for themselves. Therefore, people can earn more money by using their time accurately. This can support them to grasp their purposes.on the other hand wasting time can bring harmful effects on one's life or other people's life. For example, surgeons should manage their time in operating room otherwise there can be too much wasting blood, therefore,it results in risking people's life.

Another significant reason that shows my perspective is with time managing youth can put some times aside for their exercising. Because it is essential to stay healthy in order to thrive. Individuals can use this opportunity only by schedule their time. For instance, before preparing myself for the TOEFL exam I used to go to bed late at night therefore wake up late too. So in that time I did not have any time for studying or exercising or communicating with other people.But after I decide to practice for TOEFL I manage my time and beside studying I could be able to go running and other activities.

In short, according to all above-mentioned reasons, it can be conducted that one of the core factor to live at nowadays life is to utilize all the abilities that you have and even make it better with time managing. That was a story in the nutshell;in fact there are other important reasons and example that could be challenging, but are not mentioned above, due to the death of the time.

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...ed above, due to the death of the time.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77744807122 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61162662873 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2924779001 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141538560643 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596661436533 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426159834292 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100103731985 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346144651075 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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