Advance of technology in every step in our life makes us undergo a complex life from our antecedent. Some people hold the opinion that in modern era life is so easy to lead; however, I concur with the belief that with the invention of new technology, our responsibility also increases and it confines us to have a complex life ultimately.
In the beginning, the rapid involvement of both men and women in job sector makes harder to maintain their daily life properly. People are more busy now, they have to do different types of work; so if they are not so organized, they could not maintain all of their responsibility. For instance, I saw my mother was a housewife and she always did the household chores; she had not concern about outer world, it was easy for them to maintain only her family. On the contrary, I am a govt. job holder, so I have to manage my job, simultaneously my family also depends on me. That is the main reason I have must have plan and organizing ability to perform well in my life.
Second, day by day people become very ambitious that makes their life more complex than before. Few decades ago young generation were satisfied if they got some food or other necessary thing in life. But now, our high ambition in life always stuck us to run after wealth and other unnecessary things. In order to gain prosperity in life, we must do more work per day. It is so arduous that prosper in life without hard working. This all things make our modern life more complex than previous.
To wrap up all, I would like to say modern life is complicated and we have the ability to manage everything if we want to perform well including make progress in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'concerned'.
Suggestion: concerned
...s did the household chores; she had not concern about outer world, it was easy for them...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...hat is the main reason I have must have plan and organizing ability to perform well ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52459016393 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5388864958 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.778330946 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20485114008 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694453484789 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051482712297 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128594916883 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238681077176 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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