The world is developing and changing at such a fast pace that if we look back in the time, we will find out nothing has stayed the same. Today's life in comparison to past is more complicated and personally I believe that young people have to learn many skills such as the ability of planning and organizing. I feel this way because of some reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs:
The first and foremost reason which should be indicated is that, nowadays because of the growth in population around the world, finding an appropriate job is very competitive among young people. In order to find a prosperous job, people have to be very talented and skilful. and it is obvious that, one of those skills which is very important for employers is the sufficient ability of planning and organizing. Therefore, it is very essential for youth to improve this ability, otherwise they will lose their job in a short time. For instance, when I was working in a pharmaceutical company, I had a colleague who could never manage his tasks and he never could finish his assigned tasks on time, and finally our manager fired him after 1 month.
The other reason which should be noted is that, in this complicated world, as many of the people spend most of their time in their workplaces and commuting, therefore there would be remained a short time for allocating to their families, friends or their personal life. if young people want to enjoy of their free time by spending it with their relatives or doing their hobbies they have to learn how to plan and manage their time properly in order to keep balance between their professional and personal life.
Furthermore, I have to add this point that, the financial issues are very important in this complex world. It may happen for every person to lose his job because of any reason, and all of us should have this ability of organizing our incomes and money for the unpredictable future to prevent of facing any financial difficulties. My personal experience is a compelling evidence for this point. 3 years ago I lost my job and It took 7 months for me to find another job, and if I had not planted to save a part of my income monthly when I was working, I could not handle my life costs in that 7 months.
To draw my conclusion, according to aforementioned reasons, youth have to learn how to plan and organize all stuffs in their life in order to be a successful and reliable person in their both personal and career life and also for managing their financial issues properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64523281596 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62840834725 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490022172949 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9134967889 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.642857143 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2142857143 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21131409502 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819556002045 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424862130441 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120823255279 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258369849387 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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